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Mobile Desktop by ~eric-:iconeric-:

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©2002-2009 ~eric-
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A wallpaper in progress, I may still add some more to it and I might rework the type a bit. Please lend me your constructive critisism and let me know what would improve it.

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~defcon07 Apr 7, 2002, 10:43:44 PM
Very nice, i like the colors that you picked and i think the text works great with the design cant think of anything you could do to improve A+++ nice work
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`idlejam Apr 7, 2002, 11:06:23 PM
Actually i like this very much.. A few quips i have with it tho is that. Certain lines look jagged compared to the cleanliness of the rest of the work.. just a few real thin lines i see this happening on.. other than that looks really really good.
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~r107 Apr 8, 2002, 12:53:19 AM
kick ass shapes - this would look sweet if you gave the dark shapes a camo texture and some good shading, would turn out to look like some futuristic war machine. Maybe even put a cockpit in there and put a picture of some guy driving it :) (Smile)

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~archnemesis Apr 8, 2002, 2:05:25 AM
Damn eric, your vectorial work is perhaps the best i have ever seen. The style is oh so tight, u must note me on what program u use, if this is just using the photoshop pen tool u are amazing :) (Smile)

The colours are very military which is what u were after i am thinking...I am actually seeing a vectorrifle in the center there...which is very cool, not sure if u intended it or not.

The font and typo works amazingly well there, not exactly sure what u could add here to improve this. As Iji said there is a bit of aliasing on a few lines, but that could just be from the compression. Badass work Eric, badass Thumbs Up
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Moo Moo ||D.V.S|| Moo Moo
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~sms Apr 8, 2002, 4:30:07 AM
.type is good
.i'm not sure about the blue and the dark olive color going together, but i think thats just me :? (Confused)
.vector work is great
.all in all i like this. you have some great vector skills. nice job.
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.sean
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~thegirl Apr 8, 2002, 4:32:56 AM
finally i found a new wallpaper. i loved the one you did before, cant remember the title though. this one is even nicer, very good work =D (Big Grin) Thumbs Up
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~adelpha Apr 8, 2002, 6:35:44 AM
yeah this piece is amazing! but i want a bigger version (1600x1200)! *begging*

the only thing i dislike with the design is the '84', its to high, i would have shrinked the height with about 20%, but thats up to you :) (Smile)

like archnemesis said, i wonder what program(s) you used..?
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Adelpha
Alternative prison cell: http://adelpha.plastiqueweb.com
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~eric- Apr 8, 2002, 8:12:26 AM
Thanks for the comments everyone. I'm using Illustrator 10 for the whole thing, so I can get a hi-res print of it if need be. The anti-aliasing problems are probably just from the way Illustrator renders thin edges on-screen, I had to take a screenshot of the work in Illustrator for the image. Copying and pasting it into Photoshop kinda screwed up my colors, although was better for the anti-aliasing. Ah well, thanks again.
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- eric
http://www.turpentinegfx.com
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~civin Apr 8, 2002, 10:10:15 AM
eric, you rock. what else is there to say! =) (Smile) im not sure if i want to call it looking hitech or .. almost even organic in a way.. love how it blends together!
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